Generally, the feedback we got back from our mid-project presentation was overwhelmingly good. The panel seemed to really enjoy our original concept, and looked to be very happy with how we were handling in so far.
Some of the feedback we did receive was;
- That the story had a lot of potential, and maybe could work better as two books (however, they did say they understood why we were pushing it into one, for sales potential).
- They mentioned that they loved the idea of including the cat nip and hinting that it might be slightly drug-related, for Shrek-esque humour to entertain the adults/parents who might pick up the book.
- It was suggested to keep an eye on page count for each art era, as it could make the book repetitive and predictable.
- Building off this, I was warned to not rush each era too much, and ensure that I could get the most out of each era (eg. PMT enjoying being worshipped in the Egyptian era a bit too much to want to leave).
As always, we found all of this feedback extremely useful, and will use it to inform future creative decisions. It was also extremely validating to know they were enjoying what we were doing so far.
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