Page 1: Discussions with Artist

As stated at the start of my script, I wanted to give Katy some freedom with how she adapted my script. Issues with the script are to be discussed and rectified to make the book as professional and as entertaining as possible. Below, I have included a screenshot to show parts of our discussions to develop the page.

I think both of us are learning the perfect way to work together and make our styles work together as efficiently and effectively as possible. After noting the alterations Katy made to my script plan, I compared the two versions to find the type of thing Katy preferred to draw/animate. I found my initial script page was a lot less dynamic than I would've liked. Because of this, I decided to focus on this element of my next few pages - making the panel styles more diverse and have them communicate more movement.